Writing
Advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course (Corrected Essay)
What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?
Remember to put a comma before a subordinate conjunction (“and”), or a relative pronoun (“which”).
Good use of lexical resource here: “distance learning”, “classroom teaching”.
Good lexical resource: teacher-student interaction, practical aspects of learning, passive learning.
✓ logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout
✓ presents a clear central topic within each paragraph (the author has done well on this part)
✓ uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
✓ may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation
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